Instructions to Writer

Understand this: You need to follow only the instructions mentioned in this section. The instructions under the Prompt to Copy section is for the AI. Here are your instructions:

1. Copy all the content under the heading Prompt to Copy. Paste it into Chatgpt or any AI tool of choice. Do not press enter.
2. Scroll to the end of the prompt and till you reach the piece of text that says <replace this entire line your scene>. Replace the text with your scene.
3. Hit Enter.

Watch your scene being reviewed!

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Prompt to Copy

Here are your instructions:

1. Analyze the scene against each element listed under the section “Elements of a Scene”.
2. Rate it, and
3. Provide the output in the format mentioned under “Format:” for each element.
4. Provide any suggestions you have for the scene, including things to be added or removed.

***Format:

{{Title with Element}}

{{Bullet point – Rating. For example, Rating: Moderate.}}

{{Bullet Point – How well the element is satisfied in this scene }}

{{List of Overall suggestions for the scene}}

{{List of elements that are unnecessary in this scene}}

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***Elements of a Scene:

1. Purpose: What is the main purpose of this scene in the larger context of the story? Specifically, indicate if it:
   • Advances the plot.
   • Reveals or develops character traits.
   • Establishes or evolves relationships between characters.
   • Introduces or deepens a theme. Output example: “This scene primarily serves to deepen the relationship between the protagonist and their confidant, highlighting their growing trust and dependence.”
2. Conflict or Tension: What kind of tension or conflict is present in this scene? Identify whether it’s:
   • Internal (e.g., a character’s inner turmoil or doubts).
   • External (e.g., an argument, obstacle, or looming threat). Output example: “The scene showcases a subtle, underlying tension between the protagonist and the antagonist, as they both compete for control over the same piece of crucial information.”
3. Character Goals and Stakes: Outline what each character wants in this scene and what’s at stake for them. Describe the consequences of success or failure for each character involved. Output example: “The protagonist’s goal is to retrieve the letter without getting caught. If they fail, they risk losing the trust of their allies, which could undermine their entire mission.”
4. Emotion and Tone: Describe the desired emotional tone of the scene. How should the reader feel, and what kind of emotional responses should the scene evoke? Output example: “The tone is tense and suspenseful, with a hint of dread as the protagonist inches closer to the truth but fears what they might discover.”
5. Sensory Details and Setting: Provide a vivid description of the setting, emphasizing sensory details (sights, smells, sounds, etc.) that contribute to the mood or reflect the inner state of the characters. Output example: “The room is dimly lit, with the faint smell of must and dust. Every creak of the floorboards seems amplified, mirroring the protagonist’s rising anxiety.”
6. Action and Dialogue: Analyze how the actions and dialogue in the scene reveal character traits, advance the plot, or heighten tension. Identify instances where “showing” is used effectively instead of “telling.” Output example: “The protagonist’s clipped responses and shifting gaze reveal their unease without explicitly stating it, while the antagonist’s exaggerated gestures suggest a deceptive confidence.”
7. Change or Impact: Describe any shifts that occur in this scene, whether in the character’s understanding, relationships, or situation. How does this scene alter the character’s trajectory? Output example: “This scene marks a turning point, as the protagonist realizes their ally may actually be working against them, altering their course of action moving forward.”
8. Pacing and Rhythm: Comment on the pacing of the scene. Is the rhythm appropriate for the level of tension? How does the sentence structure (short, fast-paced, or long, reflective) enhance or detract from the scene? Output example: “The rapid-fire exchange between the characters, with short, clipped sentences, heightens the urgency of the moment, creating a sense of impending danger.” ***

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***Scene:

<replace this entire line your scene>

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